aria: ([due south] smirky fraser)
valinor spider party ([personal profile] aria) wrote2009-07-01 12:00 pm

what the hell kind of name is benton

Okay, BURNING QUESTION TIME, because I'm trying to write Fraser POV things and I keep tripping over and second-guessing the damn pronouns. When in doubt, consult the internet!

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When reading a Fraser POV story, I like/don't mind him referring to himself as

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Fraser
11 (57.9%)

Benton
14 (73.7%)

Ben
3 (15.8%)

When reading a Fraser POV story, I will allow, under certain circumstances and depending on the skill of the writer, him referring to himself as

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Fraser
12 (63.2%)

Benton
11 (57.9%)

Ben
9 (47.4%)

When reading a Fraser POV story, I really don't like him referring to himself as

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Fraser
4 (28.6%)

Benton
2 (14.3%)

Ben
12 (85.7%)


Me personally, 'Fraser' is invisible to me when I read it but I kind of feel weird having the guy refer to himself by his last name inside his own head when I'm writing him. My default is 'Benton' because I assume that's the name he uses in his head, and at this point when I read it, it also comes up invisible. I actually hate 'Ben' except in exceptional circumstances ie when the narrative starts when he's a child, because plenty of old friends call him Ben without it making me twitch. ('Benny' is not even an option, although if you're writing Vecchio-POV I find it mad charming.) The problem is that this makes sense to me but I imagine that 'Benton' is not invisible to other people and possibly even annoying, and having some raw numbers might be nice.
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[personal profile] luzula 2009-07-01 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't like Ben much, either (except in the POV of people who canonically call him that). Benton and Fraser are both good, and I usually go for Fraser, because it's the one we're used to and it's invisible. IMO, when you're in third person POV, there's still a little bit of distance between the reader/writer and the POV character, and that makes it okay to me to use Fraser. If I really want to be inside his head, I use first person POV. YMMV, though, because I know people experience third and first person POV in different ways.

Besides, none of us actually refer to ourselves by name in our heads, do we? I mean, I think of myself as "I", not "Elin" (or "Luzula" for that matter, heh). Of course, if I had to do it I'd choose my first name, not my last.

I usually use "Benton" in stories set when he's young, though. One of my WIPs is about his time at Depot and just after, and I think that's where people started calling him "Fraser". I might experiment with switching to "Fraser" at some point in that story, to show how he's being socialized into the Mountie role. Not sure about that yet, though.