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valinor spider party ([personal profile] aria) wrote2011-04-21 02:36 pm
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this post is about tortall

A few weeks ago I got the first two Beka Cooper books from the library, and, to my surprise, read them all in a go. (Or most of them; I had to return Bloodhound when I was only halfway through, so please no spoilers.) I say 'to my surprise' because somewhere in the Trickster books I reached the conclusion that I like Tamora Pierce books best when they have fabulous camp villains and lots of swashbuckling, and that her older stuff ran on nostalgia value but I'd just outgrown her. Beka Cooper told me it wasn't so; I love those books, and they filled me with the deep enthusiastic desire to go reread Alanna.

I'm at the beginning of In the Hand of the Goddess again now, and ... wow, right after reading the Beka books, it's weird. I keep imagining all the brilliant worldbuilding things that could happen! All the brilliant gender commentary! All the ... yeah, man, I still don't know what to do about the Bazhir. Possibly open diplomatic dialogue instead of making Jonathan the Voice?

The point is, though, that I keep imagining a much longer, in-depth, and progressive set of Alanna books. There would be a lot more history, especially in regards to the Old Ones and the Black City; I'd love to see those match up with the developed mythology of the later books. There would be a bit more time to get to know Raoul and Alex and Gary and Jon and Miles and George, though, bless them, I love them all even though they're mostly sketches compared to her later character work. There would just be more time for everything, the psychology of Roger and the war with Tusaine and foreign relations and the Roof of the World and everything with Thom and and and.

Really what I want, though, is the narrative of a girl who lives as a boy for eight years. And yes, there's a bit of that, but -- oof. I actually keep wincing a little. Alanna keeps being convinced that she has to prove herself five times over to be as good as the weakest boy, and utterly loathes it when she hits various milestones of female puberty, and scowls a lot when people tell her gently that she can't change what the gods gave her. On the other hand, she ends up growing very comfortably into herself, so I'd say she's maybe a bit genderqueer but not, at the end of the day, in the wrong body. What I really want is for her to identify however the fuck she wants, and while I'm at it, let's examine how Jonathan is mostly into her when she dresses like a girl and he remembers that she's a hot lady, while meanwhile George kisses Alan on street corners and Liam flips out no matter what. Oh, and let's talk about how Alanna's entire close social circle for eight years was a group of excellent guys who definitely talked about the ladies they were into while she is around; damn but it would be excellent if Alanna was bi. I am sure there are plenty of court ladies who are not silly or scheming! That would be amazing and add so many tasty layers to her ridiculous on-and-off thing with Jon. And of course she can end up with George anyway, pay attention, George makes out with Alan on street corners.

Fff. I need to shut up that awful little voice in the back of my head that keeps saying so write it yourself.
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[personal profile] starlady 2011-04-21 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I really, really wish Pierce could be induced to share the earlier, adult, one-book draft of the Alanna books. But I think I would probably still like this version of the story that you're discussing slightly better, for different reasons.

But yes, aren't the Beka books good? I was sort of out of sorts with Pierce after the Aly books--problematic premise, great execution except for Nawat, which is a huge exception--but the Beka books are great. Which reminds me, I should really read Tortall & Other Lands before I have to return it to the library.

In conclusion: I would read any of this that you would write so hard.
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[personal profile] epershand 2011-04-21 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, I want the version of Alanna you're talking about *so bad.* But then, my history with the Alanna books is weird--Alanna was my favorite book for *years* but I had no access to the others. At some point in high school I figured out I could get them via interlibrary exchange from the next county over and read them then. But I'd had an entire childhood's worth of time to construct an incredibly elaborate head-canon for what came after the first book and the rest of the series didn't live up to it. And then I was crushed and haven't been able to read any more Pierce as a result. Maybe I'll give the Beka books a chance since they don't have as much emotional weight for me as Alanna does.

My headcanon diverged before the series got actively shippy and so I had this extended Alanna/Jon/George devotion that was a whole lot more egalitarian than what wound up happening when they actually got together in the books. Also Thom got to be a hero.

But now, yeah, I'd *love* to see an Alanna who was actually able to embrace her genderqueer identity, and more history of the universe, and lots and lots more Roger and Thom.
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[personal profile] sasha_feather 2011-04-21 08:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I read all these books late-- in grad school-- and I absolutely agree with your assessment.
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[personal profile] sasha_feather 2011-04-21 08:57 pm (UTC)(link)
My reaction were that the Alanna books were pretty over-the-top ridic (but enjoyable), and I liked the books about Kel much better because they were a more realistic portrayal of feminism. I liked the circle of magic books a lot, for the characterizations and cooperative spirit (and the lesbian characters). I've only read the first Beka Cooper book so far. I still read YA, and maybe always will; I think coming-of-age stories are universal.
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[personal profile] sasha_feather 2011-04-21 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I am pretty sure I have read almost all her books! I liked Wild Magic because of all the animals, but have only a very thin memory of the others in that series. I liked how Daine and Numair showed up later in the Kel books though. One thing I loved about Kel is that she didn't end up with one of her boyfriends! I have always been frustrated by how YA books tend to insist upon pairing up their heroines at the end of the story, as if being single is a horrible fate to be avoided at all costs.
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[personal profile] cinco 2011-04-21 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Like Sasha_Feather, I read the Alanna books as an adult and enjoyed them, but I totally agree with everything you've said--they were good, but they could have been better, especially with more exploration of gender identity. I haven't read any of Pierce's other novels, although I probably will at some point.
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[personal profile] caliena 2011-04-21 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Hm, I still need to read the Kel and Bekka books, thanks for reminding me...
I just reread the Alanna Series last december because I had to write a fic about it...
It turned out Alanna/Gareth :D
I still need to translate this, it's in german...
I'd love to read something about Tortall from you...
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[personal profile] graycardinal 2011-04-21 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Riffing off of the rest of the comments:

I think the thing about the Lioness quartet is that they are both simpler in craft and pitched -- whether purposefully or otherwise -- more strongly at a younger reading audience. I quite liked the Alanna books when I first came across them (and have myself just finished the two Beka Cooper books), but I don't think they quite work as "crossover" reading for adults, in the way that some other books/series do (I am thinking here, for instance, of Diane Duane's "Young Wizards" novels, and of much of Diana Wynne Jones' body of work).

As has been noted, the "Winding Circle" cluster of novels are a somewhat different matter, as are the Beka Cooper books; Pierce has grown more ambitious and more polished along the way. These last I'd certainly recommend to adult readers of fantasy in general; the early Tortall books, not so much -- not for reasons of quality, but for appropriateness to audience.

(Pay no attention to the tiny animatronic postman bicycling up to the little voice in your head with a suspiciously megaphone-shaped parcel....)
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[personal profile] graycardinal 2011-04-21 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Having just finished Bloodhound myself (and avoiding spoilers):

I thought Pierce's portrayal of certain male secondary characters' alternative lifestyles and relationship was very well handled. I was a bit less happy with the resolution given to Beka's own relationship -- while I think the end result was the right one, it seemed to me that the execution of said result was a trifle rushed. (A point: it seems fairly clear from Pierce's end-notes that she is planning further books in the series, and that strikes me as important in the context of Beka's romance in this book.)

On the other hand, I noticed in looking at the published reviews of Bloodhound that most of them describe Beka's romance as "slowing down" the book -- which I think misreads Pierce's plotting, pacing, and characterization. We need the context of that relationship as certain other parts of the plot move forward....
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[personal profile] meresy 2011-04-21 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, man. I read the Alanna books when I was legit a Young Adult and loved them sfm. You are giving me nostalgia, but also I'm now afraid if I reread them I will find them not as awesome as they are in my vague memory of that summer between middle and high school.

I would read the heck out of your version, though. :D
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[personal profile] laceblade 2011-04-22 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
I read these first like, three years ago or something, and reaction was same. Alanna books were heinous but enjoyable, but I EFFING LOVED THE KEL BOOKS.

Haven't read Beka yet.
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[personal profile] scribe 2011-04-22 01:08 am (UTC)(link)
Have you read A Squire With Prospects? I cannot recommend it highly enough. Not exactly what you're talking about, but it does deal with all the genderplay of the Alanna books and also is, well, excellent: http://yuletidetreasure.org/archive/63/asquire.html

Unlike other people on this comment thread I haven't been able to sustain much interest in the Beka Cooper books, although I love Tamora Pierce more than anything. I got through the first...one and a half, I think, but they felt recycled and kind of juvenile to me, a step backwards in sophistication from the end of the Kel series and the Aly books. Perhaps I'll have to give them another go, though, seeing how many people are excited about them.

Also, +1 to the idea of you writing (gender)queer Alanna fic. PLEASE.
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[personal profile] pearwaldorf 2011-04-23 01:37 am (UTC)(link)
I WOULD LOVE TO READ THIS. Just sayin'.

Every so often I need to reread the Alanna and Daine books just because (I always feel a bit bad for the Circle fans because they feel so overshadowed by TORTALL TORTALL TORTALL), and it's really quite interesting to see how Pierce has grown as a writer. The Beka Cooper books are so much more nuanced (I still pitch a fit at the whole Alanna/Jon business), and I like that she's still pushing the envelope and expanding positive role models for all different types of people.

Also, have you read Ash and Huntress by Malinda Lo? One of my friends called her this generation's Tamora Pierce, and I'm suspecting they might be on to something. I think you would enjoy them a lot.
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[personal profile] luzula 2011-04-25 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I actually just reread the first two Alanna books, or rather listened to them as audiobooks. I'd read them once while young (but it was while I was visiting a friend in the US, and I had no idea how to get hold of them in Sweden), and I remember enjoying them then. Sadly, they didn't really work for me--I suspect I didn't have enough leftover nostalgia for them since childhood. Also, I find it a bit creepy when an adult sets their sights on a young person and waits for them to be grown up enough for wooing (George and Alanna).
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